Keith and Kiahni wanted to do a group call to critique and help each other out, so they both critiqued mine. I asked for 3 points of advice/feedback.
1. The Masthead looks really good but the last half of it blends in with the background. It's too thin and you could've "made it pop more."
2. They both loved the double-page spread especially "the background behind the photos" and the format of the quotes. In Keith's eyes, "I popped off!"
3. Kiahni thinks that the words in the table of contents seem "jumbled up too much" and Keith thinks that there is a lot of "underutilized space".
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